Good advice as always. You helped me on another of these a while back. I had to log in with a different name as my email address had changed.
Anything you could suggest that would make it more "sensorially rich"?
By the way, because these things can work SO well, I appreciate the care with which you look at these. Although unspecific statements can cause seeming miracles to happen, it is still very helpful to be clear so that you don't get what you DON'T want.
A couple of years ago I was working on one of these that said that we would own our home debt free. A few months later my father- and mother-in-law decided to move to another state. They gifted us a house that was mortgage free. The bad part was that we had to sell a house we were really fond of to move into a house that does not meet our criteria for a pleasant home. I guess I didn't think I needed to be that specific since we were already living in a house that pleased us very much.
Kim